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https://doi.org/10.5194/sp-7-osr10-17-2026
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Insights into exceptional freshening events in the northern Adriatic Sea throughout 2023–2024
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ED: Publish subject to technical corrections (25 Mar 2026) by Piero Lionello
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Review of: “Insights into exceptional freshening events in the northern Adriatic Seathroughout 2023-2024” by Naomi Krauzig, Alessandro Coluccelli, Francesco Memmola, Pierluigi Penna, Fabrizio Moro,Enrico Zambianchi, Pierpaolo Falco Manuscript no. sp-2025-10 General comments This work describes the effects of heavy (and frequent) rainfall events in the Emilia-Romagna and Marche (eastern central Italy) region on the properties of the Adriatic Sea coastal waters, combining meteorological and oceanographic in situ and remote sensing data, as well as circulation model output. To my opinion, the work is interesting, scientifically sound and well highlights the environmental opportunity of combined-data coastal monitoring, especially for this kind of environmental hazards. Finally, there are just some minor (suggested) corrections that I'd like the Authors to consider (see below). I therefore recommend minor revision of the paper before publication. Specific comments One comment/question: what do the Authors think about using this multi-dataset in a predictive effort (together with model forecasts), and not only a monitoring effort during the hazardous event? Or, alternatively, what do they think about creating a "crisis monitoring unit" when an extreme event is predicted, which unit immediately starts to more thoroughly analyze this combined dataset and issues reports and warnings to the communities affected by the state of the coastal waters (e.g. to the aquaculture community)? This comment is not required but may be interesting to readers. Technical corrections Abstract Line 20. (here or when next mentioned) please describe where Emilia-Romagna is (not everybody might know). Maybe add "see Fig. 2" in the text? Or, better, if Fig. 3 becomes Fig. 1, then highlight the region in this Figure? Line 27. Replace “summer-time” with “summertime" Keywords OK Short summary OK 1 Introduction Line 51. (maybe) replace "Among those" with "Among these".Line 58. Replace "several smaller" with "several small".Line 59. Replace "nutrients-rich" with "nutrient-rich".Line 61. Replace "while the plume" with "while the Po plume" or with "while the river plumes" if referred to all the rivers mentioned.Line 70. Replace "data near-real time" with "near-real-time data".Line 71. Replace "rabidity" with "rapidity". 2 Methodology 2.1. Local meteo-marine conditions Line 89. Replace "Senigallie" with "Senigallia". 2.2 Precipitation and river discharge Figure 3b. The notes on the plots are unreadable also when enlarging the document up to 200% (!): please enlarge this figure (e.g. place it underneath Fig. 3a) or enlarge the writing. Fig. 3 in general. Since it is the first figure to be cited and this is done at line 106, why is it placed at line 243, and why is it not named Fig. 1? Maybe figures should be reorganized and placed better. Line 106. Therefore, if Fig. 3 is re-located, then replace "(see Figure 3 for river mouth locations andcharacteristic circulation patterns)" with (simply) "(Figure 3)" or, better "(Figure 1)". 2.3 Freshwater rate estimation Line 113. "and the estimated area of the affected region, as determined from satelliteobservations". This sentence could be a bit more detailed (even though you cite product refs): e.g. "and the estimated affected region, i.e. via the width of the coastal current turbid band (Fig. 3), determined from satellite observations". 2.4 Complementary satellite and model-based datasets Line 134. "These included daily fields...". Could you pls include the spatial resolution too (in brackets, maybe), please? This way the reader has "right away" a more complete grip on the basic specs of the data/model used, while further details can be acquired in the cited ancillary documentation. Line 145. Replace "while the model outputs" with "while model output". 2.5 Statistical analysis Line 159 (Table 1). Maybe it could be useful to add a word in column "Product ID & type" for the Copernicus products, better describing them, e.g. "ERA5, numerical models - precipitation", "CEMS EFAS, numerical models - ocean circulation", etc. 3 Results OK 3.1 Surface freshening Fig. 1. Why do you use similar colors in each panel? In this way it is difficult to distinguish between curves (also because the fig. is quinte small). Would it not be better to use contrasting colors (e.g. blue and red) for all curve pairs? 3.2 Environmental connections Line 208. " During this period, the Po River remained well below the climatological average discharge". This is interesting. Can you comment on why? Maybe the Po was already so low that rainfall didn't manage to raise it above average? Line 228. Replace "Marche region" with "Marche region, just south of Emilia-Romagna,". Line 229. "Replace "Discharges increase" with "Discharge increases... were reported" or "and increase in the discharges... were reported". Line 233. Replace "Parma Apennines" with "inland, in the Parma Apennines". Line 259. Replace "provide spatial" with "provide a spatial". 3.3 Ecological implications Fig. 4. Same as comment on Fig. 1 curve colors... e.g. never mind the "psychological affinity" of the curve color to the color of the parameter when visually observed at sea (e.g. green for chl, brown for turbidity, etc.). 4 Discussion and conclusions Line 360. Replace "Mediterranean is particularly vulnerable" with "Mediterranean, it is particularly vulnerable". Line 375. Replace "Such integration" with "Such an integration". Appendix Line 403. "waves characteristic" with "wave characteristics". Line 404. Replace "informations are" with "information is". Line 431. Replace "information are available under" with "information is available in". Line 492. Replace "Assuming x and y are" with "Assuming that x and y are".Data and code availability, Author contributions, Competing interests, Acknowledgements and References.